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Response Essay

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Introduction

 

Writing is a key part of everyday life—whether through texts, emails, social media, or formal documents. Your beliefs about writing, shaped by practice and feedback, influence how you view yourself as a writer and how you approach tasks. For this assignment, you’ll engage with readings by professional and academic writers to reflect on your writing beliefs, examine their practices, and craft a thoughtful response connecting their insights to your experiences.

 

Genre Definition

 

A response essay is a written conversation with others’ ideas. As Graff et al. (2012) state, “Academic writing…calls upon writers not simply to express their own ideas, but to do so as a response to what others have said.” This means critically engaging with texts, analyzing connections, and reflecting on how they resonate with your own writing journey.

 

Your task is to explore one or more key themes from the assigned readings, relate them to your beliefs and practices as a writer, and respond thoughtfully.

 

First, reflect on your writing beliefs:

  • What beliefs about writing have you formed in school or elsewhere?

  • How do these beliefs shape your view of yourself as a writer?

  • What aspects of writing (e.g., process, challenges, enjoyment) stand out to you?

 

Next, engage with the readings: 

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  • Identify each author’s main claims about writing.

  • Note their evidence, assumptions, and why their ideas are significant.

  • Analyze how the texts relate to one another and to your writing experiences.

 

Explore how you want to respond: 

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  • Which ideas do you agree or disagree with? Why?

  • How do these insights expand or challenge your understanding of writing?

  • What lessons from these texts could help you grow as a writer?

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Only works presented below in the “Suggested Readings” may be used for response.

 

Organization

 

Depending on the writing situation, essays may take on slightly different structures. You have some creative license with this form. Keep in mind that the essay must still fulfill genre expectations for responding to others. 

 

  • Introduction:

    • Provide your general reaction to the readings—were they helpful, confusing, insightful, or thought-provoking? Try using one of these strategies:

      • A provocative or interesting question raised by the readings and your response or desire to explore

      • An interesting quotation from the readings and how the quote gave you insight(s)

      • A personal anecdote related to the topic of the reading and what you learned from the experience

    • Introduce a key theme or concept from the readings and how it connects to your experience.

    • End with a clear thesis statement outlining your response and the points you’ll address. The thesis will offer a guiding structure for your response: â€‹â€‹

      • theme or topic you are responding to OR

      • the author and article you are responding to, and

      • the main points you will be making in response.

  • Body:

    • Connect Ideas: Summarize relevant points from the readings, cite the authors, and relate their ideas to your experiences.

    • Reflect: Share specific writing experiences that connect to the readings. Highlight challenges, growth, or changes in perspective.

    • Discuss how the authors’ insights influence your approach to writing or challenge unhelpful habits.

    • Use topic sentences and logical organization to guide readers through your response.

  • Conclusion:

    • Revisit your initial reaction to the readings and summarize what you’ve learned.

    • Reflect on any “aha” moments or insights gained during the process.

    • Close with a memorable takeaway about your evolving writing practice.

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Some tips​

  • Use examples from the readings to support your ideas and cite them properly.

  • Consider opening with a thought-provoking question, quote, or anecdote.

  • Stay focused on ethical and constructive communication—use the essay as a chance to explore growth, not dwell on frustrations.​

 

Length & Formatting
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Essays should be approximately 750 words (no more than 1000 words; more is not necessarily better), 3 pages. A minimum of 1, maximum of 2 sources may be used. MLA style should guide formatting and citations

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Quantity does not equal quality. Writing must demonstrate clearly connected ideas and should be in your own voice. 

 

Evaluation & Assessment

 

The competencies addressed in this unit include

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  • Learn and use key rhetorical concepts

  • Practice writing in a variety of genres

  • Read a diverse range of texts, attending to the interplay of relationships

  • Apply critical reading skills

  • Draw upon strategies to compose texts that synthesize the writer's ideas with the voices of others

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Categories of assessment will measure the proficiency of the submission for publication based on the following criteria: 

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  • Rhetorical Situation

  • Narrative Experience

  • Responsive Synthesis

  • Voice: Style & Tone

  • Citations & Articulation

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See LMS for details on specific scoring measures

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Writing Process

 

Weeks 1 & 2

 

Begin by reading. (Suggested readings for this project are at the end of the assignment.) Getting a “working knowledge” of a subject means doing a lot of reading on the topic by scholars who are experts in the field. Besides, reading good writing will give you models for the structures of your own writing stories. For this assignment, you will be required to read a number of pre-selected texts. From these texts, you can begin to choose which readings and themes you want to respond to for your major writing assignment. 

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Read critically. Use critical reading strategies to draw ideas from the reading. Potential strategies for keeping track of ideas include

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  • Taking notes to capture key or interesting points

  • Asking questions about the text

  • Double-entry journals or graphic organizers 

  • Annotating the text in the margins

  • Highlighting and underlining key passages

 

Be careful not to overwrite the text; collect the most interesting or thought-provoking elements. 

Reflect on the reading. I suggest writing a 5 minute “freewrite” after each reading to get down your initial impressions and responses. *Did you know, this is actually part of doing the writing?

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Play the doubting and believing game. By challenging what you didn’t agree with and identifying common ground, you can start exploring where your writing practices intersect with those of the authors and identify some areas of difference or similarity. Reading and writing for inquiry help writers tease out ideas. These will be the building blocks of your essay.

 

Week 3
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Building on notes from the reading, start thinking about how your own beliefs and experiences with writing relate to what you have read. How would you respond to one of the authors or one of the ideas about writing? 
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Sketch out your ideas

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  • What will your theme be?

  • What main points will you focus on to draw out your theme?

  • How will you support your main points with evidence from the readings?

  • How will you show connections or departures between your writing experience and those of experienced writers? 

 

Compose a draft of your essay in preparation for peer review. Include narrative details of your own writing experience in response to readings from other writers. 

 

Week 4
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Peer Review, Revision, & Publication

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Once you complete a draft, you will share your writing with your peers. You will also have the opportunity to review your peers’ work. Consider how your peers have constructed their essays and what you can learn from their writing style. Also, give your peers critical feedback. 

 

Revision means rethinking what you wrote. As you will read in Sommers' text, minor edits are not what I mean by revision. I want you to take a close look at your work and consider both global and small scale revisions before proofreading for publication (submission). 

 

In this context, the publication is your draft submission. Publications are not always final drafts. Some writers go back to their writing and rework, refine, and sometimes even resubmit extensive revisions as an updated revision or new edition. While you don’t have the option to submit a revised edition after you have published your work for this assignment, I want you to have the experience of submitting your work in pre-press condition.

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Works Cited

 

Ballenger, Bruce. The Curious Writer, concise 5th ed., Pearson, 2017. 

 

Elbow, Peter. Writing with Power: Techniques for Mastering the Writing Process. 2nd ed. NY: Oxford UP, 1998.

 

Graff, Gerald, Cathy Birkenstein, & Russel Durst. They Say I Say. 2nd ed., W. W. Norton, 2012.

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Macleod, Shawn."Paragraph Structure." Smrt English, https://youtu.be/NLzKqujmdGk.   

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"Response Paper" Thompson Writing Program, Duke, https://twp.duke.edu/sites/twp.duke.edu/files/file-attachments/response-paper.original.pdf 

 

Wilhoit, Stephen. A Brief Guide to Writing from Readings. Pearson, 2016.

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Suggested readings: 

 

Abrams, S. "Chapter Five: Summary and Response." EmpoWord: A Student-Centered Anthology & Handbook for College Writers, 2018. 

 

Adler, Mortimer J. “How to Mark a Book.” The Saturday Review of Literature, 1941. https://stevenson.ucsc.edu/academics/stevenson-college-core-courses/how-to-mark-a-book-1.pdf 

 

Anzaldua, Gloria. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue.” Borderlands: The New Mestiza-La Frontera, Aunt Lute Book Company, 1987. 

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Baldwin, James. “If Black english Isn’t a Language, Then Tell Me What Is?” The New York Times on the Web, 1979. https://archive.nytimes.com/www.nytimes.com/books/98/03/29/specials/baldwin-english.html?scp=1&sq=James%2520Baldwin%2520If%2520Black%2520isn%2527t&st=cse 

 

Ballenger, Bruce. “The Importance of Writing Badly.” The Curious Writer. 2nd ed. NY: Pearson/Longman, 2009, pp. 43-45. 

 

Clouse, Barbara Fine. “I Know What I Want to Say, but I Can’t Say It.” A Troubleshooting Guide for Writers: Strategies and Process. 5th ed. NY: McGraw-Hill, 2008, pp. 43-47. 

 

Douglass, Frederick. Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave. Boston: Anti-slavery Office, 1845. https://docsouth.unc.edu/neh/douglass/douglass.html

 

Elbow, Peter. “Freewriting.” Writing with Power: Techniques for Mastering the Writing Process. 2nd ed. NY: Oxford UP, 1998. pp. 13-19. 

 

---. “Thorough Revision.” Writing with Power: Techniques for Mastering the Writing Process. 2nd ed. NY: Oxford UP, 1998. pp. XXXX.

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Giles, Sandra L. "Reflective Writing and the Revision Process: What Were You Thinking?" Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing, edited by Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky, vol. 1, 2010, pp. 191-204. https://writingspaces.org/?page_id=249

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Goldberg, Natalie. “Be Specific.” Models for Writers: Short Essays for Composition. 11th ed. Ed Alfred Rosa and Paul Eschholz. NY: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2012, 90-92.

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---. “Writing as a Practice.” Writing Down the Bones: Freeing the Writer Within. Boston: Shambhala, 2005, 11-14.

 

King, Stephen. On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft. New York: Pocket Books, 2010. 111-28. Print.

 

Lamott, Anne. “Shitty First Drafts.” Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life. NY: Pantheon, 1994. 21-27.

 

McKean, Erin. “Verbed!Not Every Noun Wants to Stay That Way.” The Press Democrat, 31 July 2010, https://www.pressdemocrat.com/article/news/verbed-not-every-noun-wants-to-stay-that-way/

 

Martin, Steve. “Writing is Easy!” (Originally published in The New Yorker, but also available here in the link provided for this incorrectly formatted citation: https://www.mydigitalpublication.com/publication/?i=295361&article_id=2445068&view=articleBrowser&ver=html5 

 

Merrill, Paul W. “The Principles of Poor Writing.” The Scientific Monthly. 64.1 (1947): 72-74. Print.

 

Murray, Donald M. “How to Get the Writing Done: Tricks of the Writer’s Trade.” The Craft of Revision. 5th ed. Boston: Wadsworth, 2013. 17-28. Print.

 

Raymond, David. “On Being 17, Bright--and Unable to Read.” The New York Times, 25 April 1976, https://www.nytimes.com/1976/04/25/archives/on-being-17-bright-and-unable-to-read.html

 

Rose, Mike. “The Desk: A brief memoir on the power of imagination and language.” Mike Rose’s Blog, 28 June 2021. http://mikerosebooks.blogspot.com/2021/06/the-desk-brief-memoir-on-power-of.html 

 

---. “The Intelligence in All Kinds of Work, and the Human Core of All Education That Matters.” On Being with Krista Tippett, 7 Jan. 2010, https://onbeing.org/programs/mike-rose-the-intelligence-in-all-kinds-of-work-and-the-human-core-of-all-education-that-matters/

 

Sommers, Nancy. “Revision Strategies of Student Writers and Experienced Adult Writers.” College Composition and Communication, Volume 31, number 4, 1980. 378-88. 

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Stewart, Marjorie. "Weaving Personal Experience into Academic Writing." Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing, edited by Dana Driscoll, Mary Stewart, and Matt Vetter, Volume 3, 2020, pp. 162-174.

 

Tan, Amy. “Mother Tongue.” Home Is Where The Heart Dwells, Harvard, 06 Feb. 2008, https://blogs.harvard.edu/guorui/2008/02/06/mother-tongue-by-amy-tan/

 

Tayles, Melissa. "Trauma-Informed Writing Pedagogy: Ways to Support Student Writers Affected by Trauma and Traumatic Stress." Teaching English in the Two-Year College, Volume 48, Number 3, 2021.  295-313.

 

Villanueva, Victor. "Writing as a way of doing." WSU Academic Outreach & Innovation - AOI, https://youtu.be/uOmoVtVaz4M.

 

Wilhoit, Stephen. “Response Essays.” A Brief Guide to Writing from Readings. A, 6/E ed. NY: Longman, 2012. 73-86. â€‹â€‹

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